Talk:Green Rainbow Party Platform Working Group

Thanks for setting up discussion page, Brian. Is this the way to start discussion? Is discussion about the full text, since it is all on one page?

It takes a lot of steps to do this, but seems better than obscuring flow of text by entering comments on text in [].

Regarding the preamble, my intent was that it carry ideas the idea of three realms and measures relevant to a political party.

See my note at end of current text + Brian's note, looking for 3 way division: "[Joanna note: I withdraw the alternative organization I had suggested, hoping that preface can carry the ideas of ecological wisdom, respect for diversity, etc. being relevant to everything, with special attention to government, economy, and society. I tried to streamline preface. Right now, links and comments need to be digested to enable flow.] [BrianC: One of the decisions we did come to was to use the three-part division of the platform when writing. I realize, with curiousity, that we're neglecting that decision.]"

Joanna : Do you see how we could group paragraphs under three categories. I gave up trying to, but don't think that we should use 10 Vaules or topic summaries, such as you supplied.